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Dear Ms. Beck,
I believe your video message was remarkable.  Just by listening to the story I fell in-love with your mother.  I am picturing her being a very funny woman with a strong personality.  She also seems to be an individual of many words. A woman full of passion and very expressive.  During the reading of your mother’s essay, I felt like that was me when I first came to the United States. My limited English and trying to understand everyone around me was very intense.  Going to School full time made it very challenging, it was like being in a different planet. I can definitely relate to her situation when writing the essay.
Unfortunately, the story she was telling about the Boston Marathon tragedy was very hurtful moment for many people.  However, in her words, she definitely projected the pain she was having as well, and how she was perceiving the whole situation.  I like the way you read the essay; you made it very clear on the parts where she wasn’t using proper punctuation, or proper words with future and past sentences error.  That was me back in the days.

Learning another language and mastering it to the highest level is hard. It is not impossible to make it a goal and succeed in the country where you are learning a new language from or in her case, U.S.A.  Perhaps your mother was not too young when she came to this country and made it very difficult for her to express herself better. Kudos to your mom and her efforts to write a good essay. I personally appreciate it. Thank you for sharing.

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